Planets speeding past each other
With absolutely no bother
At how fast they're hurtling through space
Within an otherworldly place
Stars zooming past with lots of grace
The sun is highlighting our face
Gazing down on earth, our mother
Planets speeding
Earth passes alien like shapes
Then there's incredible airspace
And there are thousands of other
Planets speeding
Thanks Mama😍
Aww, thanks Sumi
wooooow really nice poem love it! hope I can be like you one day
Excellent work Sumayyah! If you remember, this is your attempt of writing a Rondeau! It uses some of the styles typical of a Rondeau, such as the refrain in the opening line repeated in the end of stanza 2 and 3. A nice theme too! I am so proud of you! <3